I have written one:
Jack and Jill
went up the hill
to fetch a pail of water.
Jack fell down
rolled on the ground
and Jill screamed, "I thought we ought to go higher?"
Note: Textbook Pg. 7
Would you like to try? It's easy and fun. Just think of a poem that you know and change the last line. Make it funny or silly or zany or wacky or comical or goofy or...
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Tom and Jill
climbing a hill
when they reached the top of the hill
they fell down from a cliff.
Oh,no!
Very good Hong Ting!
ha ha he he that's funny.yes.i would like to try.poem:i fear not winter's cold or storm.i wear no clothes to keep me warm,but when spring comes , i dress in red and brighten town and country scene.
my own.
I like all the funny poem and i want to try too.I like fire and wind.Don't forget earth and sea.I like to control all of them but they are just to week.
Very creative poems Zul and Ching Han! Good job! I find Ching Han's poem quite silly and Zul's poem is a little comical. Good effort!
jack and james climb up the hill james fell down the hill james has injured iitself
Mary and Jerry went up the hill to fetch a pail orf water . Jerry fell down and broke her arm and mary said ,"i thought we ought to go higher.
Mary and Jerry went up the hill to fetch a pail of water . Jerry fell down and broke her arm and mary said ,"i thought we ought to go higher.
Mary and Jerry went up the hill to fetch a pail of water . Jerry fell down and broke her arm and mary said ,"i thought we ought to go higher.
Thats very funny but I would like to try too :).I feel cold when it is sunny day, I fell warm when it is rainy daybut when it is noon and it is not sunny and rainy day I have no feeling.
jermin
Mary and Jerry went up the hill to fetch a pail of water . Jerry fell down and broke her arm and mary said ,I thought we ought to go higher.
Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water Jack fell down and brock his leg so Jill had to carry him home.
I get up when it is 7 o'clock.
I go to brush my teeth when 8 o'clock.I go to schoole when it 9 o'clock.oh my god !!!!! so late so late
This is real isn't,Diaz is catching Emily and she fall down.
I wake up at 5.30 when its school.
then i go and brush my teeth and bath...i 6.30 then at school...but its very boring
yeo xiong wei
why does the tortise cannot eat
ANS:FAST FOOD
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catherine u cannot post that comment!the (pansai)
Does fish have ears?
I plucked a honeysuckle where
The hedge on high is quick with thorn ,
And climbing for the prize ,
was torn ,
And fouled my feet in quag-water;
And by the thorns and by the wind
The blossom that I took was
thinn ’d ,
And yet I found it sweet and fair .
Thence to a richer growth I came ,
Where , nursed in mellow intercourse ,
The honey suckles sprang by scores ,
Not harried like my single stem ,
All virgin lamps of scent and dew ,
So from my hand that first I threw ,
Yet plucked not any more of them .
Note: The name honeysuckle comes from the sweet nectar that the flower produces to intoxicate the greedy bee. Its powerful fragrance seduces the human senses as it pervades the air. The perfume of this passionate plant may turn a maiden’s head, hence wild honeysuckle is a symbol of inconstancy in love.
I saw a weird man who wear a hat and that hat is a frying pan!!!!!!
bernice said.......
i have a meeting today with my friends...my friends said they could not turn up so i was sad
as i walk home it...it is raining cats and dogs.....what a bad luck today!!!!!!!!!
Jack and Jill
Went up the hill
to fetch a pail of water Jack fell down and sprain his hand
and jill scream,"l thought we ought to go higher?"
jermin
Angel and Wayne went up to the hill
Wayne fall down from the hill and broke his leg Angel said,I thought u pour away the water
Mary and Jerry went up the hill to fetch a pail orf water . Jerry fell down and broke her arm and mary said ,"i thought we ought to go higher.
One day,Roy went fishing. He wait for 2h n he fish a big fish! He was so happy!
Roses r red
Violets r blue
sugar is sweet and so r honey
Orange is brave
Orange is bold
It's bittersweet
And marigold.
Orange is zip
Orange is dash
The brigest stripe
In a Roman sash.
Tim and his mother
went up the hill
to fetch a pail of water
Tim fell down
and rolled on the ground
his mother said "why are you so careless ?! "
Good job everyone. I enjoyed reading all your poems. Some are creative and some are funny too.
Humpty Dumpty sat on the wall.
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.
All the king's hores and all the kings men.
Could not put humpty together together again.
I got a poem to share.
I like fun with a gun and eating a bun in the sun.
same:un
That was acctually my brother's poem.And now I made him angry.don't be angry brother.stay calm.ok?
My brother likes to eat nasi lemak ......
Oneday my auntie ask him,'why you likes to eat nasi lemak ,is it taste good ?"
shizhen
Carman See
a bunch of lime is growed of time with lot of juicy lime
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