Friday, June 20, 2008

This is wrong!

Emily and John wait for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John likes to eating ice-cream. So they decided to walking to the nearest shop to bought two ice-creams. John run as fast as he could when he see the bus. He are too late. They missed the bus.

Hint (Past tense)

This passage has lots of grammatical errors. Can you make them right?

37 comments:

angel said...

1)likes

2)bought

3)are

hongting said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John run as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He was too late. He missed the bus.

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jermin said...

Emily and John is waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily likes to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-cream. John ran as fast as he could when he see the bus. He is too late.they missed the bus.

Unknown said...

Emily and John wait for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John run as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He was too late. He missed the bus.

Unknown said...

likes

bought

are

missed

Lim Ching Han said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams .John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He are too late.They missed the bus.

limlingling said...

LingLing

1)eating
2)walking
3)bought
4)run
5)are
6)john
7)wait
8)he

diaz said...

1)eating
2)walking
3)bought
4)run
5)are
6)wait

wanting said...
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chinxiang said...

lim ching siang
Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

wanting said...

Emily and John are waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John ran as fast as he could when he see the bus. He was too late. They missed the bus

catherine said...

Emily and John are waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John ran as fast as he could when he see the bus. He was too late. They missed the bus.

limlingling said...

Emily and John waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John ran as fast as he could when he see the bus. He was too late. They miss the bus.

angel said...

Emily and John wait for the bus stop.Both Emily and John Like to eats ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to bought two ice-creams. John run as fast as he could when he see the bus.He are too late.They missed the bus.

Ashley said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John liked to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams .John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He are too late.They missed the bus.

diaz said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John liked to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams .John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He are too late.They missed the bus.

Ang Le Yi said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream.So they decided to go to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John run as fast as he could when he saw a bus.He is too late.They missed the bus.

alexng said...

1)like 2)buy 3)ran 4)saw 5)was

Axeman said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop . Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream . So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He was too late. They missed the bus.

kahkah said...
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Joker said...

Emily and John were waiting for the bus at the bus-stop. Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus. He was too late. They missed the bus.

bernice said...

bernice said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

kahkah said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop .Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

xiongwei said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John liked to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

xiongwei said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John liked to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

Unknown said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John liked to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-craems.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

fangkiang said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream.So the

fangkiang said...

they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John run as fast as he could when he see the bus.He is too late.They are missed the bus.

fangkiang said...

they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John run as fast as he could when he see the bus.He is too late.They are missed the bus.

Anonymous said...

Ng Shi Qi


Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-cream.John run as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus

Elizabeth TanShiZhen said...
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Elizabeth TanShiZhen said...

Emily and John waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream. So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams. John ran as fast as he could when he see the bus. He was too late. They miss the bus

Anonymous said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop .Both Emily and John like to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.

Anonymous said...

Carman See

1)likes

2)bought

3)are

nicholas said...

Emily and John waited for the bus at the bus stop.Both Emily and John likes to eat ice-cream.So they decided to walk to the nearest shop to buy two ice-creams.John ran as fast as he could when he saw the bus.He was too late.They missed the bus.